In the dark times
I breathe in so deeply that I feel I am taking in
the ocean
and its tides.
The empty waters swarm my lungs and cling to breath that
is now suffocated
You have taken my fundamental being away from me.

1 comment:

  1. wow. emotive piece...breathing and suffocating at the same time...nice tight emotional line...

    good to see you too!


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