The window frame doesn’t shake with the gentle vibrations of traffic
There is a silence that speaks to us more than the reasoning
As we know, it is easier to convalesce in respite rather than reaction
But the echoes of the stairs will be amplified to extremes
It sounds to me as if you can hear the pumping of my heart from under my
Grief saturated jumper
It jumps from one step to the other, giving weight to the presence of pain


  1. each line in this carries weight itself and could be pondered though i am left with a tinge of sadness...

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  3. Thanks so much, Jingle! I will upload them onto a new page once I figure out how to add a separate page to the blog. They are very much appreciated.

    I am feeling better today, these words were written with a great weight on my shoulders but today it has lifted slightly.

  4. if only pain had no weight, if only burdens had no weight, if only we could carry them and still lightly fly about, flutter by, if only!

    Absolutely love it!


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