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You can keep
and behold
the last three syllables
that I will speak

4 comments:

  1. ok, so you going to give them or what? smiles. devilishly cryptic tonight...

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  2. this is excellent- i like this..

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  3. Beautiful, flows perfectly and rings in my mind.

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  4. Great rhythm & an unusual rhyme. Very economical & somehow strangely touching.

    Nadia

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