At the north face, he stands firm and tall. He represents light.
His opposite lies in the south,
where she undulates under ice, in the extremities of the dark waters.
They face each other, with significant distance between souls, and
yearn for the day when the winds will unite them.
They are opposites and share an emptiness between their distance.
There is much going on but they cannot reach.
They do not exist as one only, but bounce light from one to the other, completing their fire and ice dance in the reflection of their division.
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this is a wicked cool write...one with out the other is incomplete, yet there is distance between them...
ReplyDeleteOh wow, this is so beautiful, such a clever write Menina!
ReplyDeleteVery beautifully written! I love your words I reread this poem four times and found each time to be better than the last. Wonderful! I love this part the best.
ReplyDelete“They do not exist as one only, but bounce light from one to the other, completing their fire and ice dance in the reflection of their division.”
Gerardine
This piece is very strong, and I can feel the division being very distinct in one another and strongly represented in the unison of the experience. Excellent piece. :) I enjoy reading your expressions very dearly. Always touches the soul. Hope you are well and having a nice weekend. :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent writing, so deep. :)
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